Lovely Michael! I really loved seeing the transition from pining away at love, to realizing that she loved you back and sharing a mutual love for one another. There was a positive arc in the end, which is really hard to do, especially (as I was reminded)w with the melancholy accompaniment.But I think you found the joy and that was wonderful!
I could really see how the accompaniment was affecting your acting choices, which really made it feel like I was listening to your thoughts the entire time. I also really appreciate how active you made the song, as it could easily have just been a sad downer and had a negative arc. Great choices!!
Lovely Michael! I really loved seeing the transition from pining away at love, to realizing that she loved you back and sharing a mutual love for one another. There was a positive arc in the end, which is really hard to do, especially (as I was reminded)w with the melancholy accompaniment.But I think you found the joy and that was wonderful!
ReplyDeleteI could really see how the accompaniment was affecting your acting choices, which really made it feel like I was listening to your thoughts the entire time. I also really appreciate how active you made the song, as it could easily have just been a sad downer and had a negative arc. Great choices!!
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